1). One of the lightest creatures is a bee hummingbird. Eighteen be hummingbirds together weigh one pound. How many hummingbirds equal one kilogram?
2).At the beginning of a game of checkers, what fraction of the squares are not covered by checker pieces?
3).In 79 AD Mount Vesuvius erupted and covered the cities of Herculaneum and Pompeii with volcanic ash and mud. Serious work of uncovering Herculaneum didn't begin until the 20th century. In what year did excavation begin in Herculaneum begin? The sum of the year's digit is 19. The product of the digits is 126. The tens digit is less than the ones digit.
4). Babe Ruth called his famous baseball bat, Black Betsy. How many ounces did this bat weigh? The answer is a two digit palindrome. The product of the digits is 2^4.(2x2x2x2)
5). In music, how many notes are in 41/2 octaves?
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You should try doing these yourself. You are cheating and breaking the guidelines.
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I'm looking for an editor?
Would anyone like to edit my story? Creative criticism, IS appreciated. Here's the first part. If you are interested, I could give you the next part.
I shrieked and wailed, but nobody for miles around could hear the slightest sound of me. I clawed at the ground, my face my thighs—anything I could find. I dug so hard into my thighs that my flesh tore open. My eyes grew bloodshot as one wing exploded from my left shoulder, he was out. He had a green shawl on that covered his face, and on his back was a tight leather bag that carried arrows. He himself held the reaper and wore black bat leather wings. Moments later, a second wing emerged from my right shoulder, she was out! Her face was angelic, with long, pearl white hair and blue feathers. She had a golden glow and a gentle face. I let out a piercing shriek that could have deafened a thousand people. A long, catlike tail followed. Yet, throughout this chaos, everything was under control. And after, everything went black.
Um, I might like to, but I think I'd need to know what's going on and what your aiming to do here.
If you have an outline, please email it to me at: potcpots@yahoo.com
along with more of your story. This isn't really making all that much sense though. I need to see what the point of the story is.
Organize your thoughts. It sounds pretty gruesome, what's right here. I gotta say, it has a lot of words, but it doesn't say much. Keep writing though! Best of luck and God bless!
Edit: I'll do a quick editing of what you gave us and show you what I can do for you.
***(my edits are between stars; my critique is between parentheses)
I shrieked and wailed, but nobody for miles around could hear the slightest sound *from* me. I clawed at the ground, my face*,* my thighs—anything I could find. I dug so hard into my thighs, that my flesh tore open.
My eyes grew bloodshot as one wing exploded from my left shoulder*;* he was out. He had a green shawl on that covered his face, and on his back was a tight leather bag that carried arrows. He himself held the reaper and wore black bat leather wings. Moments later, a second wing emerged from my right shoulder*;* she was out! Her face was angelic, with long, pearl*-*white hair and blue feathers. She had a golden glow and a gentle face.
I let out a piercing shriek that could have deafened a thousand people. A long, catlike tail followed (followed what?). Yet, throughout this chaos, everything was under control. And after (after what? The chaos? Wings sprouting from this person's shoulders? Tell the reader what is going on so they will want to follow the story and read what you wrote), everything went black.
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